i like the second one. less is more. subtle is good too.

I like the blend in the fonts on the 2nd one, but I like that the first one is brighter hence more readable and the main title should definitely be horizontal. Again for readability. This is really, really good. :)

- I love the 2nd one.
- I do see fire and water (the reflection.
- Trying positioning the text like you did in the first one (so that is horizontally readable)
- Ps. Love the type choice
- And the 'glow' works well

:)

hey i like the second one better. however, it doesn't say light and water enough for me and a little too dark. but i like the black! so maybe a lil bit more colour? illumin doesn't stand out much. i like the typefaces. they are great! i feel like the whole design is a little down the page, just because the illumin aqua text bit is closer to the bottom. but yeah i really like the concept though! :)

its nice. only too blurred to say light. you can maybe leave it but give it more body. something thats says "hey theres light here" as for the aqua part, its too dark. really just a splash of color. might want to lighten in up a bit. just my thoughts. overall, its nice.